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Thread Contributor: zaaraGHAZAL :Ajab kashmash hai , ajab bekhudi hai
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Ajab hai fasaana meri zindegi ka, Ajab kashmash hai , ajab bekhudi hai
Wo sab jaanker bhi hai anjaan jaise, Mohabbat me kaisi ajab bebasi hai

Mere rubaru wo meri aarzoo hai ,Wahi meri chahat , wahi justaju hai
Kabhi saamne hai,kabhi wo nahi hai ,Meri rehguzar me ajab tishnagi hai

Wo nazreiN milaana, wo nazreiN churana, Kabhi rooth jaana kabhi maan jaana
Sataaker rulaana, manaaker hasaana, Sanam ji ! yeh kaisi ajab dillagi hai

Wo bholi si aankheN,wo chehra qayamat ! LaboN per tabassum ka pehra qayamat !
Qayamat ! qayamat ! aji bas qayamat ! Badi dilnasheeN si ajab saadgi hai

Kaha tha shafaq per mulaqaat hogi, Mohabbat o ulfat ki phir baat hogi
Wahin din bhi hoga wahin raat hogi, Badi khoobsurat ajab dikashi hai

Ye thandi hawayeN baharoN ka mausam ,Ye jheeleiN ye gulshan ye phooloN pe shabnam
Hai jhilmil sitaaron se raushan ye aalam ,Ghazab chand ki ye ajab chaandni hai

Labon se na humne kabhi kuch kaha hai, DiloN me magar goonjti ek sadaa hai
Na zaahir hai Zainy, na kuch bhi chupa hai, Na pucho ye kaisi ajab khamushi hai




عجب ہے فسانہ مری زندگی کا ، عجب کشمکش ہے عجب بے بسی ہے
وہ سب جان کر بھی ہیں انجان جیسے محبت میں کیسی عجب بے حسی ہے

مرے روبرو وہ مری آرزو ہے، مری رہگزر میں عجب تشنگی ہے
کبھی سامنے ہے کبھی ہے وہ غائب، مری راستے میں عجب تشنگی ہے

وہ نظریں ملانا ، وہ نظریں چرانا، کبھی روٹھ جانا ، کبھی مان جانا
ستا کر رلانا، منا کر ہنسانا، صنم جی ! یہ کیسی عجب دل لگی ہے

وہ بھولی سی آنکھیں، وہ چہرہ قیامت، لبوں پر تبسم کا پہرہ قیامت
قیامت ! قیامت! اجی بس قیامت! بڑی جان لیوا عجب سادگی ہے

کہا تھا شفق پر ملاقات ہوگی ، محبت و الفت کی پھر بات ہوگی
وہیں دن بھی ہوگا ، وہیں رات ہوگی، بڑی خوبصورت عجب دلکشی ہے

یہ ٹھنڈی ہوائیں ، بہاروں کا موسم، یہ جھیلیں ، یہ گلشن، یہ پھولوں پہ شبنم
ہے جھلمل ستاروں سے روشن یہ عالم حسیں چاند ہے اور عجب چاندنی ہے

لبوں سے نہ ہم نے کبھی کچھ کہا ہے مگر دل میں گونجی ہمیشہ صدا ہے
نہ ظاہر ہے زینی نہ کچھ بھی چھپا ہے نہ پوچھو یہ کیسی عجب خامشی ہے

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#2
speechless...!!!!
behad khubsurat Gazal hai, Zainyji....

padhne me lutf aa gayaa... dheroN daad Smile
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मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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Bohat bohat shukriya Aprajita saheba......Smile
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(01-06-2015, 03:33 PM)aadeil Wrote: speechless...!!!!
behad khubsurat Gazal hai, Zainyji....

padhne me lutf aa gayaa... dheroN daad Smile

bohat bohat shukriya aadil sahab..

nawazish hai aapki...Smile
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(02-06-2015, 07:44 PM)N@zneen Wrote: Waaahhh kya baat hai behad dilkash ghazal hui hai...dheron daad

bohat bohat shukriya nazneen
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(01-06-2015, 01:17 PM)zainy Wrote: Ajab hai fasaana meri zindegi ka, Ajab kashmash hai , ajab bekhudi hai
Wo sab jaanker bhi hai anjaan jaise, Mohabbat me kaisi ajab bebasi hai

Mere rubaru wo meri aarzoo hai ,Wahi meri chahat , wahi justaju hai
Kabhi saamne hai,kabhi wo nahi hai ,Meri rehguzar me ajab tishnagi hai

Wo nazreiN milaana, wo nazreiN churana, Kabhi rooth jaana kabhi maan jaana
Sataaker rulaana, manaaker hasaana, Sanam ji ! yeh kaisi ajab dillagi hai

Wo bholi si aankheN,wo chehra qayamat ! LaboN per tabassum ka pehra qayamat !
Qayamat ! qayamat ! aji bas qayamat ! Badi dilnasheeN si ajab saadgi hai

Kaha tha shafaq per mulaqaat hogi, Mohabbat o ulfat ki phir baat hogi
Wahin din bhi hoga wahin raat hogi, Badi khoobsurat ajab dikashi hai

Ye thandi hawayeN baharoN ka mausam ,Ye jheeleiN ye gulshan ye phooloN pe shabnam
Hai jhilmil sitaaron se raushan ye aalam ,Ghazab chand ki ye ajab chaandni hai

Labon se na humne kabhi kuch kaha hai, DiloN me magar goonjti ek sadaa hai
Na zaahir hai Zainy, na kuch bhi chupa hai, Na pucho ye kaisi ajab khamushi hai

wwaaahhhhh!!!! Is baakamaal ghazal ko padh kar kis qadar lutf haasil huwa, bayaan naheen kiyaa jaa saktaZainy ji !!! Is behtareen qalaam se nawaazne ke liye aap ka bahut bahut mubarak. Aap ke aur qalaam ke deedaar karne ki tishnagi badh gayee hai!! Aapne pahle kabhi aisi peshgii nahi kii....achanak ?..kya ek se baRh ke ek sher jaise kisi kokh se bahar aaya ho.....waah....

Waise to saarra qalaam khoob hua hai...

ye sher ke ahsaas bahut pasand aaye......haasil-e-Ghazal isey hisamjheN..

"Labon se na humne kabhi kuch kaha hai, DiloN me magar goonjti ek sadaa hai
Na zaahir hai Zainy, na kuch bhi chupa hai, Na pucho ye kaisi ajab khamushi hai"

Dheron daad aur duaein!!


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Harash Mahajan
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(03-06-2015, 06:01 PM)Harash Mahajan Wrote: wwaaahhhhh!!!! Is baakamaal ghazal ko padh kar kis qadar lutf haasil huwa, bayaan naheen kiyaa jaa saktaZainy ji  !!! Is behtareen qalaam se nawaazne ke liye aap ka bahut bahut mubarak. Aap ke aur qalaam ke deedaar karne ki tishnagi badh gayee hai!! Aapne pahle kabhi aisi peshgii nahi kii....achanak ?..kya ek se baRh ke ek sher jaise kisi kokh se bahar aaya ho.....waah....

Waise to saarra qalaam khoob hua hai...

ye sher ke ahsaas bahut pasand aaye......haasil-e-Ghazal isey hisamjheN..

"Labon se na humne kabhi kuch kaha hai, DiloN me magar goonjti ek sadaa hai
Na zaahir hai Zainy, na kuch bhi chupa hai, Na pucho ye kaisi ajab khamushi hai"

Dheron daad aur duaein!!


Duago

Harash Mahajan


Harash ji..aapki beshumaar mohabbaton.. inayaton.. nawaazishon aur qeemti alfaaz ka rooh o qalb ki gahraiyon se bepnaah shukriya....Smile
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Bhut khoobsurat ghazal hui hai lajawaab andaaz e bayaaN har sher apni wazah ke alg perahan mai jitni tareef ki jaaye aapki is ghazal ki wo kam hai behtreen dilfareb ghazal ke liyN daad paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye

aslam
Zindagi ke haseen lamhe ka
Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
(aslam noor aslam)
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adaab o tasleemaat !

moHerma zainy saHiba , jis tereH insaan hamesha seekhta rehta hai ajj appki yeh ghazal paRh ker bhi hamieN kuch seekhny ko mil raha hai , ghazal per baat baad mai karieNgy , mager abhi ke liye mera sawaal yeh hai keh

Ajab hai fasaana meri zindegi ka, Ajab kashmash hai , ajab bekhudi hai
Wo sab jaanker bhi hai anjaan jaise, Mohabbat me kaisi ajab bebasi hai

radeef qaafia radeef

ab kiyoN keh hamieN abhi hum ibtedaai marahil mai haiN seekhny ke is liye sawaal yeh hai keh radeef qaafia phir radeef ke istemaal ka khayaal kahaN se aaya ? kiya aisi or koi misaalieN bhi haiN ager haiN to zaroor bataiye ga kiyoN keh yeh munfarid cheez hai is se aur bhi zyada seekhny ko mily ga .

apki ghazal per tafseeli baat bahut jald karieNgy .
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वाह बहुत सुंदर
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(05-06-2015, 12:34 AM)aslam noor aslam Wrote: Bhut khoobsurat ghazal hui hai lajawaab andaaz e bayaaN har sher apni wazah ke alg perahan mai jitni tareef ki jaaye aapki is ghazal ki wo kam hai behtreen dilfareb ghazal ke liyN daad paish e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye

aslam


Aslam noor sahab...aapki beshumaar mohabbaton.. inayaton.. nawaazishon aur qeemti alfaaz ka rooh o qalb ki gahraiyon se bepnaah shukriya... Smile
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(05-06-2015, 09:51 PM)Mujeeb Wrote: adaab o tasleemaat !

moHerma zainy saHiba , jis tereH insaan hamesha seekhta rehta hai ajj appki yeh ghazal paRh ker bhi hamieN kuch seekhny ko mil raha hai , ghazal per baat baad mai karieNgy , mager abhi ke liye mera sawaal yeh hai keh

Ajab hai fasaana meri zindegi ka, Ajab kashmash hai , ajab bekhudi hai
Wo sab jaanker bhi hai anjaan jaise, Mohabbat me kaisi ajab bebasi hai

radeef qaafia radeef

ab kiyoN keh hamieN abhi hum ibtedaai marahil mai haiN seekhny ke is liye sawaal yeh hai keh radeef qaafia phir radeef ke istemaal ka khayaal kahaN se aaya ? kiya aisi or koi misaalieN bhi haiN ager haiN to zaroor bataiye ga kiyoN keh yeh munfarid cheez hai is se aur bhi zyada seekhny ko mily ga .

apki ghazal per tafseeli baat bahut jald karieNgy .


Janaab Mujeeb sahab

Aadaab o tasleemaat

Mumkin hai is tarah ka tajaurba pehle bhi kiya gaya ho, mujhe iska ilm nahi...mujhe bas khayaal aaya ki is tarah likh ker dekha jaaye....aur mujhe nahi lagta isme koi aib hai..


shukriya
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(06-06-2015, 12:10 PM)Yusuf Rais Wrote: वाह बहुत सुंदर

Shukriya Yusuf sahab
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(06-06-2015, 09:58 PM)zainy Wrote: Janaab Mujeeb sahab

Aadaab o tasleemaat

Mumkin hai is tarah ka tajaurba pehle bhi kiya gaya ho, mujhe iska ilm nahi...mujhe bas khayaal aaya ki is tarah likh ker dekha jaaye....aur mujhe nahi lagta isme koi aib hai..


shukriya

moHterma Zainy Sahiba ,

mai ne aib ki to koi baat bhi nahi kii Sad . mai to ulat yeh keh raha tha keh yeh hamary liye aik naya tajurba tha iski takhleeq apne khud se ki ya kahieN se aKhz kiya hai .

behtreen ghazal ke liye dil se daad qabool kijiye

zor e qalam aur zyada
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shukriya mujeeb sahab...Smile
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Ye thandi hawayeN baharoN ka mausam ,Ye jheeleiN ye gulshan ye phooloN pe shabnam
Hai jhilmil sitaaron se raushan ye aalam ,Ghazab chand ki ye ajab chaandni hai
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