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Chaliye ADC pe aaj se kuchh nayaa shuruu karte haiN. hum yahaaN ek nayaa khel shuruu karte haiN. vaise toh ye mahej ek khel hai aur kaise Ki khel ka naam diyaa hai 'lafz-e-radiif' toh zaahir si baat hai ki aapko ek lafz diyaa jaayega jiska aap radiif meN istemaal karenge. magar ye khel khelna kaise hai? toh chaliye, is khel ko thoda interesting banaate haiN. hamne uske liye kuchh points rakhi haiN jise hameN is khel ke dauraan zehn meN rakhnaa hogaa.

Points niche vistaar se diye Gaye haiN us per gaur kijiyegaa:
1. jaise ki upar bataayaa hai, har roz ek nayaa lafz diyaa jaayega.
2. jo lafz diya jaayega uska istemaal sirf aur sirf radiif meN hi hona chaahiye.
3. memberaan apne khud ke ya kisii shora ke ya kisii aur member ke(member ke consent se hi) ya kisii aur shaayar ke sher ya qita' pesh kar sakte haiN. magar pesh kii gayii tehriir agar aapkii na Ho toh us shaatar ka naam ya agar us shaatar ka naam pataa na Ho toh 'not mine' ya 'NM' likhna na bhule.
4. lafz koii jumle ke taur pe nahiN diyaa jaa saktaa hai; jaise 'dil-e-naadaan' ya 'gham-e-hastii' jaise jumle lafz ke taur pe nahiN chalenge. magar radiif banaate waqt jumle istemaal ho sakte haiN.
5. jo member nayaa lafz pesh karenge wo pehla sher pesh nahiN kar sakte. unhe dusre member ke pehle sher ka intezaar karna hoga.
6. har members do din meN kitnii bhii tehrireN pesh kar sakte haiN.
7. lafz-e-radiif agar radiif ke aakhir meN nahiN ho toh shaayar ko sher matle ke taur pe pesh karnaa hoga ya phir wo single sher pesh nahiN kar sakte, magar wo agar jhumle ke taur pe hai toh wo chalegaa.  
..........Example; lafz hai 'aur';
..........Member ne sher pesh kiyaa;
............[ koii din gar zindagaani aur hai
............ apne dil meN hamne thaani aur hai...] (Mirza Ghalib)
..........yahaaN radiif rahegi 'aur hai'. aur ye matlaa hai toh wo jaayaz hai.
..........vaise hi, agar sher pesh kiyaa hai...
............[ hai aur bhii dunyaa meN sukhanvar bahot achchhe
............. kehte hain ki Ghalib ka hai andaaz-e-bayaaN aur...] Mirza Ghalib
..........toh yahaaN 'aur' lafz sher ke aakhir meN hai toh, yahaaN bhii single sher post kar sakte haiN.

8. yahaaN beher ya kaafiye kii koii bandish nahiN hogi.
9. Use mahej ek khel kii tarah khela jaayega aur use competition kii tarah nahi maanaa jaayega.
However, healthy discussions and debates are invited, provided us meN members aur site ka liyaaz rakhaa jaayega is baat ka khayaal rakhaa jaaye.
10.Do din baad koi bhi member naya radeef de sakte hain...

toh dostoN chalye, der kis baat kii hai? toh lijiye hamaari aur se aap logoN ke liye pehlaa lafz hai 'log' (people).
.....
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#2
Wah waah...kya baat hai..Smile

Bade hi mazedaar aur dilchasp silsila shuru kiya hai aapne aadil sahab

Lijiye meri taraf se pehla sher haazir hai.



Humne pathrili ZameenoN me kooeN khode thay
Aaj ek booNd ke haqdaar nahi hain hum log

By Khalid Nayyar



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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#3
Zainyji,

pehle aapka shukriya adaa karnaa chahunga iis silsile kaa zima aur uska shira hamaare sar karne ke liye.... Smile

aur waaah hi waaah is khubsurat sher ke liye..... Smile

Aur Naaz, thanks to you too.... aur dheroN daad is sher per...

to chaliye meri taraf se bhii Jigar Muradabadi kii isii ghazal se aur ek sher....

tuu hamaaraa javaab hai taNhaa
aur teraa javaab haiN hum log


-- Jigar Moradabadi
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#4
Adil bhai..

Very very interesting and nice thread ..... Smile

Well done bro Thumbs Up reps added.

chalo aik sher meri taraf se bhii..

jane kyuN bichad jate haiN log..
beech safar tanha kar jate haiN log..


*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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#5
waah Hassanbhai... bahot khub... magar 'radiif' shaayad 'hain log' banii hai Smile... vaise koii baat nahiN... sher meN khayaal bahot achchhaa hai.. uske liye dheroN daad.... Smile

hamaari taraf se aur ek sher.....
ajab hai aadmii aur uskii dunyaa
chhuaa chaaNd per diloN se duur haiN hum log
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#6
Sabko mera salaam.....aur mubarakbaad is thread me shaamil hone ke liye....aadeil sahab ko bhi mubarakbaad jo unhone ise wazood me laaya.....ek sher meri taraf se.....

Ishq me humsafar ki zarurat nahiN !
Safar me tanha bhi chala karte hain log !!
Tumhaare liye to dhadakta tha ye dil .....
Tumhi ban gaye in dhadkanon ke dushman .......
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#7
(07-11-2014, 09:50 AM)N@zneen Wrote: FusooN e Adil....kya baat hai dost bahot hi achcha silsila shuru  kiya hai Smile



Ummeed hai baaqi ahbaab ko bhi ye naaya aur dilchasp silsila pasand ayega Smile


Ek sher meri taraf se arz hai.......


jab milii aaNkh hosh kho baiThe
kitne haazir-javaab haiN ham log

- Jigar Moradabadi

(07-11-2014, 10:06 AM)aadeil Wrote: Zainyji,

pehle aapka shukriya adaa karnaa chahunga iis silsile kaa zima aur uska shira hamaare sar karne ke liye.... Smile

aur waaah hi waaah is khubsurat sher ke liye..... Smile

Aur Naaz, thanks to you too.... aur dheroN daad is sher per...

to chaliye meri taraf se bhii Jigar Muradabadi kii isii ghazal se aur ek sher....

tuu hamaaraa javaab hai taNhaa
aur teraa javaab haiN hum log


-- Jigar Moradabadi

(07-11-2014, 12:31 PM)Hassan Wrote: Adil bhai..

Very very interesting and nice thread ..... Smile

Well done bro Thumbs Up reps added.

chalo aik sher meri taraf se bhii..

jane kyuN bichad jate haiN log..
beech safar tanha kar jate haiN log..



(07-11-2014, 01:34 PM)aadeil Wrote: waah Hassanbhai... bahot khub... magar 'radiif' shaayad 'hum log' banii hai Smile... vaise koii baat nahiN... sher meN khayaal bahot achchhaa hai.. uske liye dheroN daad.... Smile

hamaari taraf se aur ek sher.....
ajab hai aadmii aur uskii dunyaa
chhuaa chaaNd per diloN se duur haiN hum log

(07-11-2014, 02:04 PM)Pankaj Mishra Wrote: Sabko mera salaam.....aur mubarakbaad is thread me shaamil hone ke liye....aadeil sahab ko bhi mubarakbaad jo unhone ise wazood me laaya.....ek sher meri taraf se.....


Ishq me humsafar ki zarurat nahiN !
Safar me tanha bhi chala karte hain log !!



MASHA ALLAH

kya baat hai

ek se badhker ek sher ...superb!...Smile
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#8
HoNtoN pe muskaan ,sang haathon me liye
Matlabi duniya ke hain yeh matlabi log

zainy
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#9
waah Pankajji aur Zainyji,
behad umdaa sher hai aap donoN ke....

dheroN daad....
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#10
Jab bhi jee chahe nayi duniya basaa lete heiN log
ek chehre pe kayi chehre lagaa lete heiN log...!


NM

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Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapnaa dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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#11
waah.. Amanushji,
bahot khub... Smile
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#12
Dard Ko Mitane Ke Liye KarieN Muhabbat

Na jaane kyuN, Muhabbat me dard mand log

ZAINY
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#13
Zainyji & Naaz
Bahot umdaa sher... Smile
Lijiye meri jaanib se ek aur...

puraane rishtoN per marte haiN sab log
kahaaN jiine kii chaah rakhte haiN sab log
Heartसफ़ीरHeart

मरमरीं रूख़ से हर रोज़ नयी सुबह चले
सुर्ख़ गालों पे तेरी पलकें झुके शाम ढले

مرمریں راکھ سے ہر روز نیی صوبۂ چلے
سرکہ گالوں پی تری پلکیں جھکے شام دھلے

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#14
(07-11-2014, 07:53 PM)aadeil Wrote: Zainyji & Naaz
Bahot umdaa sher... Smile
Lijiye meri jaanib se ek aur...

puraane rishtoN per marte haiN sab log
kahaaN jiine kii chaah rakhte haiN sab log



waaaaah

Aitamad-O-Khair Andeshi Ke Woh Qisse Kahan
Ab To Apne Saaye Se Bhi Buri Tarha Darte Hain Log

nm
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#15
Khwabon ko pighlake aaine me kaid rakkha hai !
Mere aaine me sawar jate hain kuch ajnabi se log ! !
Tumhaare liye to dhadakta tha ye dil .....
Tumhi ban gaye in dhadkanon ke dushman .......
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#16
wahhhhh wahhhh wahhhh... Sabhii ahbaab ny kia khoob meHfil sajaayi hai...

ChaleN meri taraf sy bhii aik aur koshish:-

Zainy saahiba that's for you :-

jis rishty ko apny khoon se seencha ho..
ussi rishty ko pal meiN toD jaty haiN log...
*hSn* : parStaar

kia kaheN kuch kaha nahii jaata!
aah...! chup bhii raha nahii jaata.. (Mir Taqi Mir)


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#17
Ab kya bataaen aapko insaan ki fitrat
Kaisi kaisi saazishon mein kaise kaise log...
(SR)c
Shayaraana andaaz hai tera,
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka...
Har lafz mein intazaam hai,
Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka....

(SR) c
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#18
Thanks so much Naaz:-)
Shayaraana andaaz hai tera,
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka...
Har lafz mein intazaam hai,
Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka....

(SR) c
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#19
(07-11-2014, 08:52 PM)Pankaj Mishra Wrote: Khwabon ko pighlake aaine me kaid rakkha hai !
Mere aaine me sawar jate hain kuch ajnabi se log ! !

(07-11-2014, 10:33 PM)Hassan Wrote: wahhhhh wahhhh wahhhh... Sabhii ahbaab ny kia khoob meHfil sajaayi hai...

ChaleN meri taraf sy bhii aik aur koshish:-

Zainy saahiba that's for you :-

jis rishty ko apny khoon se seencha ho..
ussi rishty ko pal meiN toD jaty haiN log...

(08-11-2014, 12:04 AM)Shayaraina Wrote: Ab kya bataaen aapko insaan ki fitrat
Kaisi kaisi saazishon mein kaise kaise log...
(SR)c



bohat hi khoobsurat ashaar Masha Allah...pankaj sahab , hassan sahab,,,sanjay ji....superb!...Thumbs Up
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#20
Koun Marta Hai Kisi Par, KisKa Dum Bharte Hain Log
Samne Matlab Ko Rakhkar, Dosti Karte Hain Log

NM
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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