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Thread Contributor: zaaraSimar ki Diary
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DostoN..Aaj kuch naya karne ka mood kiya to kahaani likhne baith gayi...Padhker apni rai zaruur dijiye..Smile

Pls note: yeh meri pehli koshish hai...agar pehli khist pasand aayi tou aage likhungi...Smile



                                        
SIMAR KI DIARY --PART 1
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Aaj subah se baarish thamnay ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi….baarish ke mausam se simar ka ek anokha rishta tha, kabhi uske lab per muskuraahat laata to kabhi aankhon me aanso..

Aaj phir Simar ko kisi ki yaad bohat sataa rahi thi….laakh chahte huye bhi maazi ko bhool nahi paa rahi thi…aaj phir kuch puraani yaadon ne usay gher liya..




BichhaR ke mujh se kabhi tu ne yeh bhi sochaa hai

Adhuuraa chaand bhi kitnaa udaas lagtaa hai




Simar ne apne diary ke ek panne per yeh sher likha aur phir puraani yaadon me kho gayi..simar ko bohat dino se ek aadat si hogayi  thi, roz apni diary me kuch na kuch sher  likhti aur apne eshaason ko un ashaar me qaid kar leti…usko darr tha ke kahin uski diary koi padh na le,isiliye sirf sher likhti ..apne ehsaason aur jazbaaton ko alfaaz na deti…



Meri Kismat Likhte Likhte Mera Maazi So Gaya
Aaina Dhundla Gaya Ya Mera Chehra Kho Gaya.



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Simar ki zindegi ke sab se khoobsurat din ..uske graduation college ke din thay…


Jinhe wo kabhi bhool nahi sakti thi..un lamhon me uski saari zindegi jaise simat si gayi thi…har pal ko dil se jiya tha usne…un chand lamhon me itni khushi mili ke baqi zindegi yuun bhi guzar sakti thi…


Wo college ke khoobsurat din,un dino ki khatti meethi yaadein..apne dost, canteen ,library aur in sab se zyda Rakeb…

Rakeb simar ka senior college mate tha……

Rakeb ko pehli baar Simar ne apne college ke pehle din dekha tha…parking area me zor zor se shor ho raha tha..waha kaafi bheed jama thi..Simar ne paas jaaker dekha tou kuch senior ladke ek junior ladki ki ragging kar rahe thay…waha Rakeb bhi apni doston ke saath zor zor se hasi mazaak kar raha tha….

Rakeb ne ladki se kaha: “meri maa agar gaana nahi gaa sakti tou ek poem hi padho….kuch tou seekha hoga school me”

phir saare ladke hasne lage..is qadr shor gul tha ke Simar ghabra gayi..

Simar kisi tarah waha se jaan bacha ker class ki taraf daudi ke kahin wo bhi na phas jaaye…in senior ladkon  ko bada maza aata hai junior ladkiyon ki ragging me, kahin koi akeli ladki mil jaati tou bas shuru hojaate thay..

Simar ka college ka pehla din kuch khaas nahi tha…Introduction aur phir ek do boring lectures..koi dost bhi nahi bane…pehle hi din simar bore hogayi…

High school ke doston se bichadne ka gham waise hi usko sataa raha tha ,aur ammi abbu ki zabardasti ki wajah se arts me interest hote huye bhi science lena pada tha…

Beta gamma waise bhi uske sar ke upar se jaata tha…uff...



Ye kya jagah hai dosto
Ye kaunsa dayaar hai



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Waise Simar bachpan se hi bohat hi khamosh tabiyat ladki thi,Maa Baap ki ek lauti aulaad, ..shayed bhai behan na hone ki wajah se akelepan ki  aadat si thi  usay..dono parents job karte thay to zyada waqt Saleha aunty (maid) ke saath hi guzarta..usko painting ka bada shauq tha, khali waqt me painting karti, ya apni Dolls aur Teddys ke saath bateiN karti..


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Saleha aunty kabhi kabhi sham ko usay  paas waale park le jaati to waha usay pados ke bachche Adila aur Aftaab ke saath khelna me bada maza aata..Adila usse do saal badi thi tou wo usay Adila baji kehker bulati aur Aftab simar ka humumr tha..Aftaab aur simar ke hamesha koi na koi baat per Jhagde hote, kabhi jhoole per tou kabhi khilonon ko lekar, ..per Adila dono ko samjha ker maamla nipta deti..per jab bhi teeno milte bohat masti karte

Aftaab simar ko moti kehker chedta to simar bhi kam na thi wo usay takloo kehti…

Adila aur simar ke parents me bhi ahista ahista dosti hogayi, aur phir kayi saal tak dono families me kaafi dosti rahi,weekends per khoob aana jaana hota, kabhi birthday parties to kahi barbeque…bas bahane chahiye tha dono families ko milker enjoy karne ke liye….

Simar jab high school me thi tou Adila aur Aftaab apne  parents ke saath Newyork shift hogaya..Bohat royi thi simar us din jab airport per Adila aur Aftaab ko see off karne gayi thi…Simar phir se jaise akeli hogayi zindegi me…chup chup rehne lagi

Unse roz chatting karti ,phir ahista ahista chatting ka silsila bhi kam hone laga tha…

Phir se akelepan ki aadat hone lagi...



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High school ke baad Simar ko shehr ke sab se bade graduation college me daaqila dila diya gaya



Likha Howa Tha Mera Maazi Jis Ke Tinkon Par
Meri Uraan Mein Haayil Wo Aashyaana Raha



Graduation college ke dusre din...........

To be continued....

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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#2
PART 2


Dusre din college me ek seminar tha, auditorium me saare college ke students jamaa huye..ek ke baad ek speeches ho rahi thi..Rakeb bhi achanak kuch doston ke saath ander aaya aur sab se aage jaaker baith gaya…phir shuru hogayi hooting, comments…seetiyaan…

Principal baar baar Rakeb ki gang ko warn kar rahe thay, wo phir bhi na maanta, apne jokes se saare hall ko hasata jaata, ek do baar to principal bhi muskura diye…

Simar samaj gayi Rakeb college ka Don maalom padhta hai, Rakeb aur uski gang se shayed saara college darta tha, kisi me itni himmat nahi thi usay chup karaaye, hmmmmm..shayed koi politician ka beta hoga…isiliye college me bindaas gundagardi karta phirta hai…Simar mann hi mann Rakeb ke bare me apni raey bana rahi thi..

Ghar jaaker aadat ke mutabiq ek sher apni diary me dar kar liya

Allah bachaaye meri jaan ke
Razia gundo mein phas gayi




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Agle din traffic ki waja se college der se pahunchi..to dekha main gate ke paas police ki van khadi hai, aur pure college me garma garmi ka mahaul hai…usne apni bike park ki aur class ki aur chaldi..class jaaker pata chala subah subah bohat bada jhagda hua hai Rakeb aur uske doston ka dusre college ke ladkon ke saath….dusre college ke ladke hamari college ki ladki ke saath ched chad kar rahe thay to Rakeb aur uske doston ne dekh liya aur khoob maar peet shuru hogayi…yaha tak ke kisi ne police ko bula liya…saare ladke bhaag gaye…

police puure college me chaan been kar rahi hai…principal ne saqt hidayat di hai sab ko ,ke koi kisi ka naam na le…bekaar me college ki aur students ki badnami hogi…uff …saara din tension bhara tha…per pata nahi kyun simar ko yeh sunker achcha laga ke Rakeb ne apni college ki ladkiyon ke liye jhagda kiya.…aahaan herogiri bhi…impressive… Smile

dil-lagii un kii dil-lagii hii nahiiN
ranj bhii hai faqat haNsii hii nahiiN



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Do chaar din tak Rakeb aur uski  gang college nahi aaye..

Kuch din baad…

Ek din Simar apni bike park karke class ki ore jaane lagi thi ke uska dupatta dusri bike ki handle me phas ker thoda sa phat gaya…Simar palti aur bike ki handle se apna dupatta chudane lagi thi .. apni favorite dress phatne ki waja se udas ho gayi ,

Itne me  waha paas se Rakeb aur uske dost guzar rahe thay..ek dost ne mazaak me kaha,”pata nahi yeh ladkiyan itne lambe lambe dupatte kyun pahenti  hain..

Rakeb aur uske saare dost zor se hase, phir Rakeb ne dekha Simar bohat ghusse me thi..aur naraaz bhi…  Aur agar koi kuch aur kehta tou shayed ro deti..

Rakeb ne apne dost ko daantte huye kaha” chup be..”kuch bhi bolta rehta hai”..

Rakeb ne simar ka dupatta bike ki handle se chudaaya aur kaha:”aap jayiye madam ”

Simar chup chap waha se jaane lagi….(Rakeb ki is adaa ne simar ka jaise dil jeet liya)


usne Rakeb ko apne dost se puchte huye suna :“kaun hai yeh ?”

Dost: Simar hai ..first yr student

Dusra dost: Tujhe badi khabar rehti hai saari ladkiyon ki

Rakeb…chalo yaar, jaldi karo..wo gujju lecturer aa gayi to class me ghusne nahi degi..


Simar ne aaj pehli baar Rakeb ko itni Qareeb se dekha tha, uski aakhon me ek ajeeb si kashish thi…na chahte huye bhi Simar Rakeb ki aur khichti chali jaa rahi thi..


Wo khoobsurat saadgi.wo shauq e toofaan
Tehar gayi zameen ,dol utha aasmaan


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Roz kahi na kahi dono ka aamna saamna ho hi jaata…Rakeb kabhi Simar ke saath koi ched chad nahi karta, balki agar koi aur ladka Simar ke saath badtamizzi karte dikhayi diya, tou uski khair nahi…pata nahi kyun per Rakeb Simar ki bohat zyada izzat karta tha..kabhi kahin saamna hota to bas Hi kehker muskura ker chala jaata…

Simar Rakeb ki har  ada per fida hone lagi…dil hi dil me Rakeb ke liye jagah banti gayi…per himmat nahi thi ke use baat kare…bas door se dekhker khush ho jaati..

Kisi ne sach hi kaha pyar kabhi bhi kisi ke bhi saath ho sakta hai..simar ne kabhi yeh nahi socha tha ke itni jaldi usay kisi se pyar ho jayega..mushkil se college join kiye ek mahina bhi nahi hua tha aur phir Rakeb jaisa ladka jiski reputation itni kharaab ke bas pucho mat...

Simar (bas ek yahi reh gaya tha Simar tujhko pYar karne uff...pata nahi aage aur kya hone waala hai...)


Ishq par zor nahi, hai ye wo aatish Ghalib,
Ke laga'ye na lage aur bujha'ye na bane

Taazaa muhabbatoN ka nasha jism-O-jaaN meN hai
Phir mausam-E-bahaar mere gulsitaaN meN hai





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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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PART 3



Do hafte baad ..Simar ne apni birthday per college canteen me sabki daawat rakhi, uska bohat mann tha ke Rakeb ko bhi invite kare per himmat na huyi…break time me zor shor se canteen me party chal rahi thi…itne me Rakeb achanak apne doston ke saath wahaa aaya…usne party hote dekhka aur paas aaya…


Rakeb: kya baat hai dosto akele akele party ? kisi ne hame invite bhi nahi kiya?

Afsha (Rakeb ki cousin):Aa jaayiye Rakeb bhai,,aaj Simar ka birthday hai..

Rakeb simar ki taraf dekhta hai..

Simar (ghabraate huye): please join us…



Atif ne apni chair Rakeb ko offer ki, Afsha ne ek plate me cake aur snacks offer kiya…Rakeb ne  plate lete huye Simar ko birthday wish kiya…

Rakeb: well..!!..kisi ne bataya nahi warna aapke liye koi gift laate

Simar muskuraayi,aur dabi aawaaz me boli :actually kuch planned nahi tha, sabne insist kiya tou choti si party rakhi hai..Per sham ko ghar per party hai aap free hain tou zarur aayiye…baqi sab dost bhi aa rahe hain

Rakeb: jee zarur..kyun nahi..

Rakeb: btw nice dress…Smile

Simar: thanks..Smile


Pir thodi der hasi mazaak ke baad Rakeb aur uske dost waha se chale gaye


KyuN mujh pe hua hai mehrbaaN tu
Ek zarra-e-khaak aur kahaaN tu



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Aaj pehli baar simar ne Rakeb se baat ki thi..aaj jaise uski khushi ka koi thikaana hi nahi tha…uski birthsdayper jaise best gift mil gaya ho..…saara din gaane gaati rahi uchal kood aur masti karti rahi…



Ye pyar ka pehla ehsaas bhi ajab hota hai…paun zameen per nahi hote..insaan udne lagta hai…ek ajeeeb si khushi..ek nasha ho jaise…
Rakeb ki aankhon me ajeeb sa pyaar aur apnapan dikhaayi diya usay..dil hi dil me Rakeb ke sapne dekhne lagi thi…


Phool khilte hain baharon ka samaa hota hai,

Aise mausam mein hi to pyaar javaan hota hai.

Dil ki baaton ko hothon se nahi kehte,

Ye fasaana to nigaahon se bayaan hota hai.


Sham ko dawaat ki zordaar tayyariyan hone lagi thi…bohat saare dost aur rishtedaar kI daawat thi…mehmaan aane lage aur Simar ko bas sirf ek shaqs  ka intezaar tha….usko pata nahi kyun yaqeen tha Rakeb zarur aayega…


Kaafi der hogayi..saare mehmaan aagaye per Rakeb ka koi pata nahi…ammi abbu ki zidd per simar ne cake kaat diya aur log dinner karne lage…Simar ki aas tootti gayi…usay laga shayed bewaja khwaab bun rahi hai…agar Rakeb ko aana hota tou ab tak aajata…kaafi der ho chuki ab tou mehmaan waapis bhi jaane lage…Simar bohat zyada upset hogayi ..uski aankhen ab bhi har thodi der me darwaze ki taraf jaati..ek ummid sit hi ke shayed aa jaye…party khatm hogayi saare mehmaan chale gaye…per Rakeb nahi aaya..


Faza Mein Kaisi Udasi Hai Kya Kaha Jaae
Ajeeb sham ye guzri hai kya kaha jaae





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Dusre din Simar Rakeb ko college me  dhoond rahi thi ..lekin agar wo mil bhi jaata tou kya karti…itni himmat nahi thi ke usse na aane ki waja pooche..ghussa bhi thi aur naaraazgi bhi…shayed apni qismat se zyada ummid lagaye baithi thi…


Sochne lagi ke Rakeb ne tou kabhi usay us nazar se nahi dekha, wo tou bas dost samajhta hai…haan thodi bohat care karta hai, wo tou college ki saari ladkiyon ki hi karta hai…


Rakeb kahin nazar nahi aaya, mayoos hoker ghar chali gayi..


Din yuhi guzarte gaye, Rakeb kabhi nazar bhi aata tou bas HI ya  hello kehta, aur Simar me itni himmat nahi thi ke apne dil ka haal usay suna sake..

Ek ajeeb khashmakash si thi…koi hal hi nahi nikal raha tha Simar ki uljhan ka…



Patta patta, boota boota, haal hamaaraa jaane hai,
Jaane na jaane gul hi na jaane, baagh to saaraa jaane hai



Usne Dekha hi nahi apni hatheli ko kabhi...!!!
Us mein dhundhlli si kahi meri bhi lakeer to hai



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Ek din Simar college ke baad ghar jaa rahi thi tou dekha tez baarish ho rahi hai, aur sonay per suhaaga .uske bike ka tyre bhi flat hai, uff…wo soch me pad gayi ab kya kiya jaaye, socha abbu ko call karti huun, itne me Rakeb apni car me waha se guzar raha tha, usne Simar ko akele dekha


Rakeb: kya hua?

Simar: wo bike ka tyre flat hogaya hai, shayed puncture hai..

Rakeb: hmm…theek hai aao meri gaadi me baith jao main ghar chod deta huun..

Simar:..nahi ..its ok..i will manage..

Rakeb: arre..kaha na aao baitho gaadi me....koi zarurat nahi hai yaha akele baarish me intezaar karne ki..

(Simar ka yuun rakeb ka haq jataana bhi achcha laga)…Smile

Simar:..theek hai ..aati hun..bike ko lock kiya aur car me baith gayi

Rakeb: aur kya chal raha hai aajkal…koi ladke ya lecturers se koi problem to nahi..

Simar:..nahi sab theek hai..

Rakeb:..hmm good..kabhi koi problem ho tou bata dena

Simar:jee



Phir thodi der dono chup rahe..

Simar :..(wow ..i don’t believe this, main Rakeb ke saath car me huun.akeli…no one around…itna achcha mauqa hai simar aaj dil ki baat bata de)..badi himmat karte huye.

Aap meri birthday party per nahi aaye?



Rakeb : arre haan..lo karlo baat..aapne apna phone number aur ghar ka address tou diya hi nahi tha,,kaise aata



Simar..: oh haan..soo true..main waqay bhool gayi thi…(uff..how stupid of me..main bhi na ek number ki bewakoof huun, saari sham intezaar karti rahi…bechara kaise aata apna address hi nahi diya usay)

I am sorry…I really forgot about it..

Rakeb: its ok…  Smile



Simar: lagta hai aapko cars ka bada shauq hai..kaafi saari cars hain aapke paas,

Rakeb:cars mera passion hai..jaanti ho mera secret desire kya hai?

Simar: kya..

Rakeb: to drive Bugatti veyron some day

Simar:..wow..!..



Rakeb:..tumhara koi secret desire hai?

Simar:..well…nahi ..koi khaas nahi..( tumhare saath drive per jaa rahi huun, aur kya chahiye mujhe)



Rakeb:hmmm…weekends per kya karti ho ..free time me?

Simar:facebook, movies, kabhi kabhi cooking bhi karti huun?..nayi dishes try karti huun

Rakeb: aahaan..sounds interesting

Simar:kisi din aayiye ghar , apne haath ka bana pizza khilaungi

Rakeb: sure…. Smile



Rakeb: aur kya hobbies hain?

Simar:kabhi kabhi thodi bohat painting bhi kar leti huun…

Rakeb: really?

Simar: haan



Thodi der baad

Rakeb..tape on karte huye…:music ka shauq hai?

Simar:haan ..ghazals ka bohat shoauq hai mujhe..jagjit singh, ghulam ali, abida parveen r my favorite..

Rakeb: achcha..bollywood , rap waghera pasand nahi?

Simar..haan kabhi kabhi movies ke songs bhi sunti huun



Signal per car ruki tou rakeb ki nazar coffee shop ki taraf gayi



Rakeb: coffee piyogii?

Simar: naa..lekin ice cream chalega..Smile

Rakeb: what? Ice cream ? seriously? Itni bearish me?

Simar:..well.. ...  yeaa …  Tongue

Rakeb: kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ladkiyan aadhi paagal hoti hain..Smile

Simar…aadhi nahi poori paagal…..Smile

Rakeb:..yea..actually you are right..poori paagal ….Allah bachaye in ladkiyon se..

Khair..ice cream parlour is road per tou nahi hai, off the track hai, car mod luun…

Simar: oh!..phir rehne dijiye…may be someother time…ghar per mom dad pareshan honge.

Rakeb: tou phone karlo unhe…aur kaho thodi der hogi..

Simar: r u sure?

Rakeb: yea..ofcourse..ab madam ne pehli baar kuch farmaish ki hai tou poori karna hi hai…

Simar: aahaan, agar pehle pata hota tou agra ka petha ya kashmiri pulao maang leti..Smile..do teen din ki drive ho jaati aapke saath…Tongue

Rakeb:  hahaha…very smart haan..?..impressive.. Smile

Simar: kidding..  Smile


Rakeb: kaunsi flavor chahiye

Simar: chocolate


Car ko side me park karte huye..yahi wait karo, abhi aaya do min me..


Simar:..(oh god!...ye ho kya raha hai aaj mere saath kahin main koi sapna to nahi dekh rahi…Rakeb ke saath itni der se baithi huun, itni baatein ho rahi hai…khud ko pinch karti hai..ouch…sach hi hai..)..( kaash ke waqt yahi tham jaaye..yeh raasta kabhi khatm na ho…yuhi hum hamesha ek dusre ke saath rahe..aur pata nahi kya kya sochne lagi aur mann hi mann muskuraane lagi..)..


Itne me rakeb ice cream ke saath laut aya

Simar: thanks.. Smile

Rakeb: my pleasure…. Smile


Dono ne phir kaafi der tak baatein ki, idher udher ki…kaafi hasi mazaak bhi karte rahe..phir baton baton me simar ka ghar aa gaya..


Simar: haan bas yahi black gate waala ghar

Rakeb:hmm


Car ruki..per jaise simar jaana hi nahi chahti thi, aur rakeb bhi nahi chahta tha ke wo jaaye…ek do min tak dono yuhi baithay rahe…bas ek dusre ko dekhte jaate , kuch kehna chahte thay shayed, phir khud ko rok lete..


Simar: ( car ka door kholte huye)..ok thanks for the lift , aur haan thanks for the ice cream treat as well..

Rakeb..Smile

Rakeb: suno

Simar.: jee

Rakeb: (kuch kehte kehte ruk jaata hai)…kuch nahi

Simar:..r u sure?

Rakeb..yes..

Simar: ( pls boldo jo kehna chahte ho…kya pata phir mauqa mile na mile …)

Simar: ok then bye


Car se niche utar ker car ka door band karti hai


Rakeb: suno simar..

Simar: jee

Rakeb: agar zindegi me mauqa mila tou… kisi din agra ka petha aur kashmiri pulao zaruur khilaunga..



Simar:. (hairat ke saath dekhti hai aur muskuraate huye..)…main intezaar karungi..bye for now, got to go…Smile

Rakeb: bye.. Smile


Baarish ke yeh shaam shayed simar ki zindegi ki sab se khoobsurat shaam thi..aur shayed isay wo saari umr nahi bhuulsakti thi...



Tere dil mein meri saanson ko panaah mil jaye ...

Tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaye


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Din ba din mohabbat badhti jaa rahi thi, Simar ka dil ab uske qaabu me na raha…raat din sirf ek hi khayaal …ek hi soch..tasavvur me sirf Rakeb hi Rakeb…Simar ko khud nahi pata tha yeh uske saath kya ho raha hai aur kyun…per wo bohat zyada khush thi…Rakeb se Hi hello bhi ho jaati tou jaise usay bohat badi khushi mil jaati…

Rakeb kisi aur ladki se baat karte dikh jaaye to madam ka mood off hojaata…Rakeb ko lekar possessive ho jaati..

Lekin yeh bilkul andaza nahi tha ke kya Rakeb bhi use utni hi mohabbat karta tha…puche tou kisse puche aur kya…

Kabhi lagta ek tarfa pyar hai tou kabhi lagta shayed Rakeb bhi interested hai..


Tumsa koi aur is zameen pe hua, toh rab se shikayat hogi ... 
tumhe chahne waala koi aur hua, toh qayamat se pehle qayamat hogi
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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Zainy Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH jee kia kahne aapke aap toH harfan meiN maahir hai... Bade khoobsurat afsaane ki shuruaat rahi...
Sab se achchchi baat nazar aayi aapke presentation ki... intressting ...

Is khoob afsaane par meri dheroN daad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
Islaam is a last upgraded version of religion ....
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#5
Shukriyah Sameer sahab...Smile..
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Aap Ki Dost

Zaara


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#6
PART 4

Din yuhi guzarte gaye..aur simar ki mohabbat badhti hi jaa rahi thi…


Ek din Rakeb simar ke class aaya


Rakeb:..Guys intercollege Guiz competition hai next week..kaun kaun hissa le rahe hain apne haath uthao…

Saari class chup rahi , kisi ne haath nahi uthaya..


Rakeb: oye: naalayako..koi ko aage aao…


Aadil..:Rakeb bhai..agle week se semesters bhi hai..tayyari karni hai


Rakeb..dono ki tayyari saath saath kar lena…naam do apne..


Simar: (..accha mauqa hai, …Rakeb ke saath preparation ke dauraan waqt bitaane ka mauqa milega..)


Simar : main participate karungi


Rakeb: Aahaan…okay..Thumbs Up


Rakeb..chalo theek hai, mujhe juniors se do naam chahiye thay, Simar aur Adil dono ke naam likh raha huun..tum dono break time me college library me milna mujhse…topics discuss karna hai..

Simar aur Adil: okay..


Breaktime me Simar aur Adil library pahunchay..waha Rakeb nahi tha…bas nikhat (Rakeb ki classmate)..Akele baithi thi…


Adil Nikhat se: Rakeb bhai nahi hai?


Nikhat: Nahi, mujhe bhi breaktime me yaha milne ko kaha, aur khud ghayab hai..


Simar: oh..


Itne me Rakeb waha aata hai


Rakeb: sorry guys..I am late..


Nikhat: its..ok…Smile


Rakeb:Anyways,..hamare college se hum char rahenge finals me..main aur nikhat seniors group me aur simar aur adil juniors me..
Un sab ke haath me ek ek paper dete huye…yeh rahe topics , lets divide and prepare…adil aur simar pehle tum dono chun lo ..


Simar: well..main current affairs per prepare karungi..


Adil..: main..history


Rakeb:..chalo theek hai..baqi topics main aur nikhat le lenge..Guys ! work hard..do saal se hamara college trophy jeet raha hai..is saal bhi hame hi jeetna hai..



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Pressure bohat zyada hai is saal 4 aur colleges add huye hain ..raat din mehnat karo…take help from Mr Khan aur net per bhi kaafi saara matter mil jayega…


Har haal me hame jeetna hi hai


Simar: (OMG..ye to bura phas gayi main…agar meri waja se haare to Rakeb kabhi maaf nahi karega mujhe…ab naam waapis bhi nahi le sakti…izzat ka sawaal hai..Ya..Allah meri izzat rakh lena)


Adil: Rakeb bhai.. hum poori koshish karenge.. Insha Allah hamara college hi jeetega..


Rakeb: Insha Allah


Simar aur nikhat :Insha Allah


Sabki ki preparations shuru hogayi..simar ne bhi raat din khoob mehnat ki..aur phir aaya quiz ka final competition waala din..


Sab ke sab nervous thay….pressure bohat zyada tha..baaqi teams bhi equally fit thi…


Saara hall khachakhach bhara tha, front rows me saare colleges ke principals aur baqi staff baithay thay…Rakeb ke college ke principal bhi aaker baith gaya..unhone Rakeb ki team ko paas bulaker kaha..”I know you can do it.guys !!  Good luck !”


Kuch der baad competition shuru hogaya.. ek ke baad ek rounds hote gaye..Nikhat aur Rakeb ki preparation bohat achchi thi..almost sabhi rounds me Simar ka college hi aage tha..


Simar aur Adil bhi beech beech me kuch answers de rahe thay…lekin Nikhat was brilliant..shayed koi aysa sawaal na tha jiska jawaab na diya ho usne..prinicipal bhi khoob encourage kar rahe thay team ko..


Final rapid fire round aaya..Rakeb ne Nikhat ko bheja..aur Nikhat ne jo dhuaNdaar performance di, ke saara hall thaliyon se goonjne laga..ayse lag raha tha jaise usne Poori Wikipedia raT li ho… she was really amazing..


Simar ka college jeet gaya…Nikhat ki performance per dusre college ke principals bhi usko mubarakbaad dene lage..


Rakeb bhi bohat khush tha..Principal to Rakeb ko gale lagaker usko Mubarakbaad dene lage..u did it again my son…you made me proud again..is college ki shaan ho tum..mujhe pata that tum log jeetoge..


Ab Simar ko wajah samaj aayi…kyun principal rakeb ki saari shararaton aur badmaashiyon  ko maaf kar dete thay..


Usme kaafi saari khoobiyan bhi thi…baad me Adil ne bataya ke taqreeban saare intercollege events me Rakeb ki waja se kayi trophies aaye hain is college ko..he was really good in extracurricular activities..Isiliye wo principal ka favorite tha…


Simar ko jaise Rakeb ko chahne ka ek aur bahana mil gaya..Smile

Thodi der baad charo winners ke naam announce huye..Simar aur uske dost trophy lene stage per gaye…


Trophy lete waqt jab Rakeb ne  Simar ke haath ko chua tou jaise usko current sa laga …Rakeb ka pehla ehsaas, behad pyara laga Simar ko…

Dusre din college me bada function hua..stage per chalo winners ko bulaya gaya aur princi ne dil khol ke sab ki tareef ki aur kaafi saare gifts bhi diye..


Saare college me jaise party ka mahaul bana hua tha..koi lectures nahi hue…saare classes me gaane, dances aur hungama..


Rakeb ne sham ko apne ghar per kuch khaas doston ki daawat rakhi aur simar ko bhi invite kiya..

Chehre Pe KHushi Chha Jati Hai Aankhon Mein Surur Aa Jata Hai |
Jab tum mujhe apna kehte ho apne per ghuroor aa jaata hai…



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#7
Zainy Sahiba,
wah wah wah wah...
Kya baat !
Bohot khoob.. Ek baar shuru kiya to rukne ka mann nahi kiya, aur Simar ki diary poori paDh li.
Baaqi ki kahani ka bhi intezaar rahega.
Bahot baDhiya..
Sagar Aashna
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#8
thanks a lot sagar sahab...Smile
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#9
PART 5




Waise simar ko parties ka bilkul shauq nahi tha,..bheed bhaad se bohat ghabrati thi….per ab kyun ke Rakeb ki party thi ..tou jaana hi tha..


Shaam ki party ke liye Simar ne apna sabse favorite dress choose kiya …. Rakeb ke ghar pehli baar jaa rahi thi, shayed isiliye hadd se zyada excited thi…


Shaam ko waqt per Simar Rakeb ke ghar pahunchi…zor daar party chal rahi thi,….kaafi saare college friends aur kuch staff members bhi thay waha…



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Rakeb ne simar ko welcome kiya aur phir apne ghar waalon se milane ander le gaya..


Rakeb apni nana nani ke saath rehta tha,


Rakeb ki nani bohat hi sweet lady thi..unhone Simar ke maathay ko chooma aur phir pyar se bulaker paas bitha liya, aur dher saari batein karne lagi..


Nani ji ne Rakeb ke kaafi saare bachpan ke qisse sunaye…...


Unhone bataya ke Rakeb bachpan se hi bohat shararti ladka hai, ..hamesha koi na koi badmaashi karta rehta hai..Rakeb ke dono parents doctors hain aur Newyork me rehte hain…


Dono bohat zyada busy rehte hain… isiliye kuch saalon se Rakeb nana nani ke saath hi rehta hai..nana ke laad pyar ne usay thoda bigad diya tha…per Rakeb dil ka bohat achcha hai aur apne nana nani se behad pyar karta hai…aur unka bohat khayaal rakhta hai…


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Simar aur nani Dono kaafi der tak  batein kar rahe thay itne me waha nanaji aaye


Nana nani se:..arre bhai..tum kaha apni kahaaniyan lekar baith gayi…bachi ko party enjoy karne do


Nani..bohat pyari bachchi hai Masha Allah… Smile


Nana: haan wo tou hai.. Smile


Simar: aap dono bhi bohat bohat sweet ho.. Smile


Nana  Rakeb ko aawaaz lagaate hain.:  Rakeb:..kaha ho bhai, idher aao..


Rakeb: jee nanu..


Nana: arre: Simar beta ko le jao..party me ..wo yaha hum budhun ke saath bore hojayegi..


Simar: arre nahi nahi nanaji…mujhe bohat achcha lag raha hai nani ji ke saath baatein karke..waise bhi mujhe zyada shor gul pasand nahi…main yahi theek huun..


Nani: arre nahi nahi beta..hum phir kisi din aur bhi dher saari batein karenge…aaj jao aur party enjoy karo..




Nana: haan haan tum log enjoy karo..


Rakeb:.jee nanu..chaliye madam..


Rakeb Simar ko hall me le jaata hai ..waha saare dost party enjoy kar rahe thay….


Simar:.I think mujhe ab chalna chahiye…


Rakeb: kyun ? kya hua..abhi to dinner bhi nahi hua.


Simar..kuch nahi.. bas main parties me bor hojaati huun..


Rakeb:..yaar tum bhi kamaal ho..parties me bore hoti ho…baarish me ice cream khati ho…saare kaam ulte hi karti ho kya.. Smile


Simar: aysi hi huun.. Smile


Rakeb..hmmm.. Smile


Achcha chalo tumko kuch dikhata huun…


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Rakeb simar ko apne room me le jaata hai..


Kaafi bada room tha…aur achche se organized bhi tha..ek taraf table per Rakeb ke parents ki tasveer rakhi thi…. Waha dusri ore shelf me kaafi saare trophies, medals aur certificates bhi thay


Simar: nice room


Rakeb: thanks


Simar: yeh aapke parents ki tasveer hai?


Rakeb: haan


Simar:…nice couple..aapki mom bohat beautiful hain..


Rakeb: yep…

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Simar: wow! …Itne saare trophies….great!


Rakeb: thanks..


Rakeb: (simar ko window ki taraf bulaata hai..)..idher aao tumhe kuch dikhata huun..


Simar:..kya hai?


Rakeb:.( aasmaan ki taraf haath dikhata hai)..wo jo taara dekh rahi ho, wo mera sabse best friend hai..jab bhi tanhaayi me apni khidki khol ker baaher dekhta huun, hamaesha yahi rehta hai…aur main isse dher saari batein karta huun..

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Simar:   (badi hairat se Rakeb ko dekhti hai)..achcha..



Rakeb: mere nanu ko astronaut banne ka shauq tha, per kuch waja se bane nahi, wo bachpan se hi mujhe taare dikhate rehte aur unki kahaani sunate ..mujhe taaron se badi mohabbat hai..


Aur mera dream hai kisi din space me jaaon aur taaron ko nazdeek se dekhun..


Simar achcha…wow!..that sounds interesting…


Rakeb :..waha taaron se zameen ko dekhunga kisi din…


Simar: sure..Hmm…tu aap astronaut banna chahte hain..?


Rakeb: hmm


Rakeb: kisi ko batana nahi,..ab tak koi nahi jaanta yeh baat, maine sirf tumhe batayi hai…


Simar: ..yea ..ok. . Smile


Simar: (lagta hai Rakeb bhi meri tarah bachpan se akela hai..hmm..tanhaayi me taaron se baatein karta hai..).aap apne parents ke saath kyun nahi rehte?


Rakeb:..chalo chalo hall me chalte hain.. sab hamara intezaar kar rahe honge..


Simar..: :..( hmm looks like , ye batana nahi chahta)..


Simar: ok..


Dinner ke baad Simar nana nani ko bye karne ander gayi, unhone khoob duaen di usay..pata nahi kyun simar ko ayse lag raha tha ke Rakeb ne pehle se zarur kuch na kuch bataya hai simar ke bare me unko ..wo dono bohat attention de rahe thay simar ko…..simar bhi bohat khush thi aur special feel kar rahi thi


Jab ghar jaane lagi tou nana ne insist kiya ke Rakeb usay ghar chod de…


Rakeb ne raaste me kaafi batein ki…simar bas sunti rahi


Rakeb…Apne dreams , ambitions..pata nahi kya kya bolta raha..


Phir achanak..


Rakeb: Simar kya tumne kabhi kisi se pyar kiya hai?


Simar..:  (ek dum se shocked)..aa .naa..nahi tou


Rakeb:..hmm


Simar:..aur aapne..?


Rakeb:..(simar ki taraf dekhta hai.., phir smile karta hai)..yaha sa right lena hai?..


Simar:..haan yahi black gate waala ghar ..


Rakeb.ok..


Simar: ok bye.. Smile


Rakeb: bye ..see u.. Smile



Raat ko Simar kaafi der tak jaagti rahi aur sochti rahi…aaj usne Rakeb ki shaqsiyat ka ek alag hi pehlu dekha tha…usay bilkul andaza nahi tha, Rakeb ander se bilkul akela hai, ..aur bohat hi masoom bhi hai..


Badon ki izzat, apnon se mohabbat..har ek baat khabile tareef thi Rakeb me..


Aaj rakeb ne usay apne dreams ke bare me bataya tou simar ko bohat achcha laga, ..aysa laga jaise wo rakeb ki zindegi me ek khaas muqaam rakhti hai..Per kyun rakeb apne dil ki baat use chupata hai?..kyun use nahi kehta ke wo usay chahta hai?..kaafi saare sawaal simar ke zehn me aa rahe thay..


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Ab zindagee ka maqsad, hai bas tumhara saath

Ek bar keh do tum bhee, hatho me le ke hath





Tere Bin Kuchh Nahi Bhaataa Hain Mujhe

Har Taraf Tu  hi Nazar Aataa Hain Mujhe



Sambhaala hai maine bahut apane dil ko

ZubaaN par tera phir bhee naam aa raha hai

ahaaN raaz koyee chhupaaya na jaaye

Muhabbat me aisa mukaam aa raha hai
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Zaara


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#10
ohoo.... yaar aaj phir kuch nahi kahaa dono ne......................uff...

kal tak intezaar karna padega. Sad

jaldi jaldi sab likh daalo. lol
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#11
(26-02-2015, 11:17 PM)sarika Wrote: ohoo.... yaar aaj phir kuch nahi kahaa dono ne......................uff...

kal tak intezaar karna padega. Sad

jaldi jaldi sab likh daalo. lol


Aayiye ayiye..khushaamded ..Mohtarma...aap aaye bahaar aayi...Smile

Tou aakhir hamare simar aur rakeb apko yahaan kheech Ker laane me kamiyab ho hi gaye.......Tongue

Ama .. zara ahista ahista mazay lijiye kahani ke..aysi bhi kya jaldi hai...Smile


"Ye shabnami lehja hai ahista ghazal padhna
Titli ki kahani hai phoolon ki zabani hai"
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Zaara


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#12
wah wah!

magar aaj ki dose kahaan hai madam?

intezaar mezrein gadaaien baithe hain Smile
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#13
Zainy Jee Aadaab...!

Mashaa Allaah kia kahne Zainy jee waqai behad khoobi se aage badh rahi hai aapki story...
Aapki kahaani ka abhi tak ka safar behad khoobsurat aur dilkash raha... Kahani meiN kirdaaroN ko achche se add kar rahi haiN aap... jo kahaani ko aur bhi rochak aur khoobsurat bana rahe haiN...

Is laa jawaab afsaane par meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Aur is khoobsurat kahaani ko rokiyega nahi ... episode meiN zyaada gap mat dijiyega ...
Waiting for next episode ...

Congrates and best of luck for this nice story...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Smile
Islaam is a last upgraded version of religion ....
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#14
(27-02-2015, 11:42 PM)sarika Wrote: wah wah!

magar aaj ki dose kahaan hai madam?

intezaar mezrein gadaaien baithe hain Smile

thoda intezaar aur sahi. ....Smile
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(27-02-2015, 11:48 PM)kwahish Wrote: Zainy Jee Aadaab...!

Mashaa Allaah kia kahne Zainy jee waqai behad khoobi se aage badh rahi hai aapki story...
Aapki kahaani ka abhi tak ka safar behad khoobsurat aur dilkash raha... Kahani meiN kirdaaroN ko achche se add kar rahi haiN aap... jo kahaani ko aur bhi rochak aur khoobsurat bana rahe haiN...

Is laa jawaab afsaane par meri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Aur is khoobsurat kahaani ko rokiyega nahi ... episode meiN zyaada gap mat dijiyega ...
Waiting for next episode ...

Congrates and best of luck for this nice story...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Smile


bohat bohat shukriya sameer sahab

bohat achcha laga aapka comment padhker...waqay bohat khushi huyi yeh jaanker ke aap sab ko yeh kahani pasand aa rahi hai..

jee bohat jald...aage ki kahaani post karungi
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#16
PART 6




Dusre din subah


Rafia (Simar ki maa):..Simar uthoo..11 baj gaye hain..kitni der tak so rahi ho..


Simar: oh 11 baj gaye…raat ko der se neend lagi thi mom..


Rafia:.accha chalo niche aao..tumhare abbu breakfast per intezaar kar rahe hain..


Simar: abhi aayi mom..


Dining table per..



Muneer ( Simar ke abbu): Kya chal raha hai aaj kal..padhai kaisi chal rahi hai tumhari..?


Simar: ek dum first class abbu..


Rafia:..Theek se khao….apni Plate khatm karo..


Simar: peT bhar gaya mom..


Rafia: maine kaha na roti khatm karo


Muneer: arre ..jaane do..kuch aur kha legi thodi der se..


Rafia:.aap isay laaD pyar me poora hi bigad do..koi baat nahi sunti hai yeh aajkal meri..


Simar: achcha yeh lo mom..ek aur niwala kha liya..bas ab khush?


Simar apne room me jaati hai , itne me phone aata hai


Simar: hello.

Dusri ore se: Hi moti kaisi hai?


Simar:..oye..takloo..tuu?..kaisa hai tu?


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Aftaab:.moti pehchaan liya tune mujhe?




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Simar: kahaan ghayab tha itne din?..na koi phone na msg ?


Aftaab: arre yaar..college ke baad .. basketball ke classes ko jata huun, phir gym..phir padhai..saara din hi nikal jaata hai..aur tu bata moti ..tu kaha ghayab rehti hai aajkal..?


Simar: oye mujhe moti na bula..main moti nahi huun ..ok?


Aftaab: tu bhi to mujhe takloo keh ker bulaati  hai…itne achche baal hain mere sar per, salman khan bhi dekhker sharmaa jaaye..ek baar abbu ne bachman me kya baal mundwa diye…tou kya saari umr takloo bulayegi mujhe..


Simar:..hehehehe….haan takloo hi bulaungi…takloo takloo takloo.. Tongue


Aftaab:.moti moti moti..Tongue


Simar…jaa main phone rakh rahi huun..


Aftaab:..arre!..ruk meri maa…achcha sorry, aage se nahi kahunga..


Simar:..Adila baji  kaisi hain?


Aftaab: achchi hain..


Simar: hmm..aur koi girlfriend mili ya nahi tujhe abhi tak?


Aftaab:.wellll!...bohat saari hain, ek ho tou bataun


Simar:.aahaan..kitni hain..?


Aftaab:.arre yaar…char paanch to college me hi hain…aur do char pados me hain..


Simar: chal jaa jhoote..yeh mu aur masoor ki daal..shakl dekhi hai apni..tujhe kaun boy friend banayegi..


Aftaab:..arre jaa jaa. ..meri shakl dekhker to salman khan shahrukh khan Sharma jaaye…jahaan jaata huun waha  ladkyon ki line lag jaati hai..


Simar: huh!..salman khan..uski to ungli ke barabar bhi nahi hai tu


Aftaab:.salman khan wo budha takloo, uska mera kya comparision..


Simar:oye. Salman khan ko kuch bolega to pitega mere haath se..main uski sab se badi fan huun..samjha?


Aftaab: zarur bolunga..budha takloo, budha takloo


Simar: sudhar jaa warna sach me pitega


Aftaab..: achcha chal jaane de, sun


Simar:kya hai?


Aftaab:ek good news hai.


Simar:.wow!..tu baap banne waale hai..mubarak ho.. Smile


Aftaab:.oye moti..abhi shadi hi nahi huyi, bachche kya aasmaan se tapkenge..


Simar:..to kya teri lottery lagi hai?


Aftaab: Meri maa...mujhe bolne degi ya khud hi bak bak karti rahegi?


Simar: achcha bol


Aftaab:adila baji ka rishta tay hogaya hai..


Simar:kyaaaaaaa?..kab? kisse?..


Aftaab:..abbu ke friend ka ladka hai….abhi 2 din pehle hi dekhne aaye thay aur un logon ne pasand kar liya..


Simar:..do din hogaye..aur tu mujhe ab bataa raha hai..


Aftaab:..ladka bada handsome hai..engineer hai..


Simar : accha..abhi photo bhej


Aftab: ok..bhej raha huun..


Simar: wow yaar!..yeh tou waqay bohat handsome hai…naam kya hai?


Aftab: farhan hai..


Simar: shadi kab hai?


Aftaab: june me..


Simar:.you mean..4 mahine baad?


Aftaab :haan..


Simar:..wow!..


Aftaab: shadi india me hi hogi..ladke ke parents wahi hain


Simar: really?...that sounds interesting..matlab tum sab yaha aa rahe ho shadi ke liye…that’s really great… Smile


Aftaab: haan..aur yaha se kuch chahiye tou bata dena…le aayenge tere liye..


Simar : ofcourse chahiye..kaafi lambi list hai, ..msg kar dungi


Simar: yaar itni jaldi shadi..itne sare dresses silwaane padenge, mahendi ke liye ek, phir ,shadi ke liye ek, dinner ke liye ek..aur..


Aftaab: baji ki shadi hai teri nahi..itni tayyari kar rahi hai…yeh ladkiyaan bhi na, bas har waqt bahaane chahiye shopping ke..


Simar: haan ..wo tou hai..hum ladkon ki tarah nahi hote..ek hi jeans me saare functions nikal le..


Aftaab:..aur nahi tou kya..das das jode kaun khareede..


Simar:adila baji kya ker rahi hain?..baat karwa.


Aftaab: wo bhi gayin hai shopping ko…all girls are same…huh


Achcha sun ammi Rafia aunty se baat karna chah rahi hain..zara rafiya aunty ko phone de..


Simar: ek min.


Rafia: Assalamualikum Naheed  kaisi ho?


Naheed: (Aftaab ki ammi).wa alikumassalam Rafia..Alhamdulillah bilkul theek….


Simar apne kamre me chali jaati hai, Aur..kaafi der tak puraani yaadon me kho gayi, jab adila aftaab aur ye..masti kiya karte thay…park ke khel kood..picnics ..aur parties..kaise ek dusre le ladte jhagadte thay phir dost ban jaate..


Zindegi bhi kaise tezi se aage badh jaati hai..aur hamare paas sirf yaadein reh jaati hain….itni jaldi adila ki shadi bhi tay ho gayi..



Waqt Badal Jata Hai , Insaan Badal Jaate Hain ....


Waqt - Waqt Pe Rishto Ke Andaaz Badal Jaate Hain..

 



Ammi: simar


Simar: jee ammi


Ammi:Tumhara phone hai


Simar:kaun hai?


Ammi: adila hai


Simar: hello..adila baji


Adila:.kaisi ho simar?


Simar: bilkul theek..aap bataiye..kaisi hain?..shadi pakki hogayi aur aapne hame bataya hi nahi


Adila: haan yaar..mujhe bhi tou thode din pehle hi pata chala..sab kuch itna jaldi jaldi hogaya..


Simar: hmm..bhaijaan bohat handsome hain..maine pic dekhi hai..ek dam jhakkas hero type..Smile


Adila:..oye chup ker nazar na laga unko..


Simar: aai hai…abhi se “unko”..dekhna shadi me dono ki khoob khichayi karne wali huun..


Adila: theek hai meri maa kar lena jee bhar ke khichayi..


Adila: achcha sun..shadi per meri saari cousins saari pahenne wali hain..tu bhi apne liye saari le, 


Simar:..saaaaareeeee….noooo..main bohat uncomfortable ho jaungi yaar..


Adila: tou kya jeans pahnegi..?


Simar:..koi salwar suit pehen lungi..yaar


Adila…jee nahi..bas saree hi pehenna hai tujhe…waise  bhi meri saari cousins aur friends tujhse milna chahti hain..tou bas tujhe shadi per sab se best dikhna hai..


Simar: mujhse kyun milna chahti hain?


Adila:..offo..bas yuhi..tu bas koi achchii si saree ready karwa..achcha ab rakhti huun..bye


Simar: arre !suno tou…hellooo…offo rakh diya….ab yeh kya drama hai yaar…saaaree oh god!..


Simar: ammmmiiiii..


Ammi: kya hua..


Simar:..yeh adila baji bhi na bas..hadd hogayi…keh rahi hain saree pehenni hogi shadi per..


Ammi: han to pehn lo..achchi lagogi..


Simar:..main uncomfortable ho jaungi..  Sad


Ammi:..tum ek kaam karo..aaj se roz saree pehn ker do ghante practice karo..tab tak aadat ho jayegi


Simar: offo aap bhi na


Ammi: aur nahi to kya.. 


Simar: achcha..laayen, apni koi saree den…mujhe try karni hai


phir khud hi jaker ammi ki saari almari ulat pulat kar deti hai.. aur kaafi sariyan try karti hai..


Simar: ( khud ko aayine me dekhte huye)..wow!...not bad!...  Tongue..


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Zainy Jee Aadaab...!

Ab lag raha hai ke kahaani ke twist ubhar par aa rahe haiN... Rolleyes
Nice episode ... but aik baat mujhe mere dostoN ne bataayi thi ke episode ka end kisi na
kisi twist par kiya kareN... jisse padhne waloN ke mann meiN halchal rahe...

Wel nice atempt and enjoyful story...

Waiting for next episode... Smile

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
Islaam is a last upgraded version of religion ....
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shukriya sameer sahab..

yeh jaanker achcha laga ke aapke kuch dost bhi kahaani padh rahe hain aur unko bhi kahani pasand aa rahi hai

aapke doston ka hukm sar aankhon per, main poori koshish karungi ke story me suspense khayam rahe, ..kisi twist per roka karungi aage se..Smile
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PART 7




College me semester exams shuru hogaye..har taraf padhai ka mahaul tha…sab ke sab kitaaben  liye baithay hain…simar bhi mehnat se padhayi me lag gayi…weekends per bhi saara din library me baith ker padhai karti rehti..

Simar ek din library me baith ker notes bana rahi thi….kuch senior ladke aaye waha…simar ko akela baitha dekhker uske paas aaye aur usay gher ker ched chaad karne lage..Mr khan ( library incharge) ne notice kiya aur fauran waha aaye aur ladkon ko warn kiya ke waha se chale jaaye..ladke unki baat nahi mante..zor zor se hasi mazaak karne lage..

Simar waha se uthker jaane lagti hai ..tou ladke usay rok lete hain..jaane nahi dete

Mr khan ladkon ko baar baar warn karte hain..

Mr khan: ab agar tum log yaha se fauran dafa na huye tou main principal ko call karunga

Haseeb.(senior).: ama chill karo yaar..hum tou bas madam ka naam pooch rahe hain..

Danish( dusra senior): yaar khan bhai..tum bhi kamaal ho ..bar baar principal ko beech me le aate ho..

Mr khan: maine kaha na chup chap chalo jao yaha se..sharm nahi aati..apni hi college ki ladkiyon ko ched te rehte ho hamesha..

Haseeb: Lo karlo baat..tou kya dusri college ki ladkiyon ko chede..??

Sab zor se hanste hain..

Danish:..Simar ji..aap kaunse chakki ka aata khati hain…khud ko bade achche se maintain kiya hai…

Haseeb: haan yaar..hamari  class ki ladkiyaan  tou saari ki saari ..tun tun ki behne hain..

Phir sab zor zor se hanste hain.

Simar: ghabraayi ..chup chap sar niche kiye apni book ko dekhti baithi rahi..uski itni himmat bhi nahi thi, ke sar utha ker unke chehre dekhe…

Danish: boliye na simar ji..kuch to boliye..humse bhi to dosti kijiye..

Haseeb: haan ji humse bhi tou dosti kijiye..suna hai aap Rakeb ki dost hain..hame bhi apna dost bana lijiye..

Simar: (rakeb ka naam sunker soch me pad jaati hai..ke inko kaise pata)

Danish: arre bhai humne aapko rakeb ki gaadi me ghoomte phirte dekha hai..suna hai bohat jamti hai dono ki

Haseeb: Kaun lagta hai rakeb tumhara?

Danish : cousin hoga…hahahaha..

Mr khan  principal ko call karte hain, per wo college me available nahi hote tou phir rakeb ko call karke waha bula lete hain..

Rakeb:.(.tezi se bhaagta hua ander aata hai…aur dekhta hai 4 ya 5 ladke simar ko gher ker ched chad kar rahe hain..phir sochta hai, ladai jhagda fuzool hai, hoshiyari se kaam lena hoga..)..arre yaar simar tum yaha baithi ho…main kab se canteen me tumhara intezaar kar raha huun..

Simar: (hairat se rakeb ko dekhti hai..)

Rakeb dekhta hai ke wo akeli ghabraayi huyi baithi hai, thodi der aur ho jaati tou zarur ro deti..Rakeb aaker Simar ka haath pakad ker usay baher le jaane lagta hai…tou daanish usay rok leta hai

Daanish: ek min ek min…bhai ..zara hamari bhi tou dosti karwado inse...hum bhi dosti  karna chahte hain..

Rakeb: Haan haan zarur kyun nahi…Simar yeh Daanish bhai hain, yeh Haseeb bhai, aur yeh Naseer bhai…salaam karo inko

Simar: Assalamualikum

Rakeb: chalo (..yuhi baat karte karte simar ka haath pakad ker Library se baaher  le jaata hai..)




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Baqi Ladke  usko dekhte hi reh jaate hain..

Baaher parking me

Simar: thanks..

Rakeb: ghusse se simar ki taraf dekhta hai

Simar: (  dar aur ghabrahat se sehm jaati hai)

Rakeb: kya zarurat thi akele library me baithne ki..books le jaa ker ghar per bhi tou padh sakti ho..

Aur phir himmat bhi nahi ladkon ko jawaab deni ki..unse nipatne ki..nikhat ko dekha hai..college ke saare ladke use darte hain..

Kisi me himmat nahi use ched chaad kare..

Simar: ( chup chaap rakeb ki baatein sunti  huyi butt ki tarah khadi rahti hai)

Rakeb: sun rahi ho main kya keh raha huun..?

Simar:jee.(rona shuru kar deti hai…tap tap aansu tapak jaate hain rakeb ke dar aur ke ghusse se)




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Rakeb: ohho..tum ladkiyaan bhi na…bas rone me first…achcha baba..rona band karo..I am sorry..

Simar: (aansoo pochti hai .)..mujhe kya pata tha..yeh log yaha achanak aa jayenge aur badtamizi karenge..

Rakeb: zindegi me har situation ke liye ready rehna padta hai.. aur khud hi situation ko sambhalna padhta hai..

Rakeb: Ek kaam karo.. tum kal se gym join karlo..

Simar: kya? Gym?..nahi nahi mujhse nahi hoga

Rakeb: kyun nahi hoga?..tum kya aasmaan se utri ho..?..kitni saari ladkiyan gym jati hain regularly aur fit rehti hain…aysi situations life me aati rahengi…main kya hamesha aata rahunga tumhari madad ko..?

Kal theek 5 baje aa jaana , main tumhara naam likha dunga udher..

Simar:.per…

Rakeb: .per war kuch nahi..chalo ab gaadi me baitho ghar chod deta huun tumhe..

Simar: nahi main chali jaungi..

Rakeb: haan haan chali jaana..jab kung fu achche se seekh lo…to phir akeli chali jana…ab chalo baitho..

Simar :nahi…mujhe nahi jaana aapke saath..

Rakeb: offo baitho yaar…ice cream khilaunga

Simar:..muskura deti hai aur gaadi me baith jaati hai

Rakeb: haDD hai…ek tou inki madad karo phir inko maska bhi maaro…pata nahi Allah miya ne ladki kyun banayi..

Simar: ghusse se rakeb ko dekhti hai..

Rakeb..: (hanste huye simar ki taraf dekhta hai..)…paagal.. Smile



Simar:..  ( Rakeb ki aur dekhti hain aur phir rakeb ka hansta hua chehra dekh ker,..uska saara ghussa bhaag  ho jaata hai..khud bhi hansne lagti hai, phir Sharma ker nazrein jhuka leti hai)…. Smile

dono der tak chup baithey rahe..

Rakeb:  Weekend per soch raha huun nani aur nanu ko kahin baaher ghumaane le jaun…bohat din se unko kahin baher nahi le gaya..

Simar:.achcha…good idea..unki sayr hojayegi, ghar baithay baithey bore hote honge..kahaan jaa rahe ho?

Rakeb: shehr se baher ek resort hai hamara..bohat achchi jagah hai….shehr ke shor gul se door, bohat sukoon milta hai mujhe waha…wahi jayenge..

Simar: achcha..

Rakeb: ( Simar ki taraf dekhta hai )..Tum bhi chalogi hamare saath?

Simar: main?..

Rakeb: haan tum

Simar: main chalker kya karungi?

Rakeb: saath chalo..nani ko khushi hogi..

Simar: ( rakeb ko dekhti hai..)..sirf nani ?

Rakeb:..(hairat se simar ko dekhta hai)..haan…nana ji bhi khush honge?.. Smile

Simar:..hmmmm…aur aap?

Rakeb:..(muskuraate huye)..well..mera kya hai..mujhe koi farq nahi padta.. Smile

Simar:.( aahaan…achcha ji .. attitude..fine)..well..wo main weekend per zara busy huun..shayed nahi aa paungi..aur shayed ammi allow bhi nahi karengi… Sad

Rakeb:.hmm..arre!..waha rehne thodi jaa rahe hain..raat tak laut aayenge…tum manao apni ammi ko..

Simar:..( kyun manaun ammi  ko..jab tumhe koi farq hi nahi padhta)..bohat strict hain nahi maanengi..

Rakeb:..oohhoo…theek hai ..phir main sadia ya salma se puchta huun.(Rakeb ki class mates)..I am sure wo log maan jayengi.. Tongue

Simar: (ghusse se rakeb ki aur dekhti hai…)…(haan haan zarur le jao unhe..poori class ko hi le jao..mujhe kya,… yeh ladke hote hi ayse hain…huh..bilkul parwah nahi hoti inko…dil tou kar raha hai…uff)..hmmm.. Angry

Rakeb: waise place bohat achchi hai..bohat saari greenery hai..aam, amrood aur imli ke kaafi saare darqt hain..aur ek chota sa pond bhi hai…usme kaafi saari white and pink ducks bhi hain..waise tum bhi chalti to enjoy karti…per ..khair tum to busy ho na… Smile

Simar:..(jalao aur jalao mujhe)..hmmm.. Angry

Rakeb: soch raha huun…barbeque karte hain udher…sardi ka mausam hai, barbeque ka bada maza aayega.. Smile

Simar..(sadia aur salma ko khila dena..mujhe nahi pasand barbeque)..hmmm.. Angry

Simar: yahi rok do car..main yaha se paidal chali jaungi..

Rakeb: kyun? Kya hua?.   Smile

Simar: kuch nahi.. Sad

Rakeb..arre nahi nahi is tarah tumhe raste per kaise chodd sakta huun..ghar tak chod dunga..

Simar:…ghusse me chup chap baithi rahi.. Angry

Rakeb: yahi ghar hai na.

Simar: haan..thanks for the lift..bye..

Rakeb..suno,

Simar: jee

Rakeb:..Sunday ko subah 6 baje aa jaunga pick karne …..apni ammi ko manaa lena… Aur . tayyar rehna ..bye ..  Smile 


Aur chala jaata hai Simar ke jawaab ka intezaar  bhi nahi karta..




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Simar:..muskura ker ghar ke ander chali jaati hai..  Smile

Simar: ammmmiiii

Ammi: kya hua..itna chilla kyun rahi ho?

Simar: wo main gym join kar rahi hoon..

Ammi:   gym …kyun?..(hairat se abbu ki taraf dekhti hai aur ishare me puchti hain…ab isay kya hua)

Abbu  (ishare me .. pata nahi..)

Simar: wo actually na ladkiyon ko hamesha fit rehna chahiye,... aur ….situation ko sambhalna chahiye…aur…..pata nahi kya kya karna chahiye..uff..

Ammi aur abbu: hanste huye…haan haan sahi hai, bilkul sahi hai…zarur join karo.. Smile

Simar: aur wo Sunday ko mujhe picnic per bhi jaana hai..

Ammi: picnic?..kaha?

Simar : wo mere college ka ek ladka hai …uske nani aur nana ke saath resort jaana hai..shaam tak laut aaungi.

Abbu…hmm..theek hai  sham ko jaldi laut aana..

Simar: thank u abbu…aur apne room me chali jaati hai...

Ammi:..aapki tabiyat to theek hai?..

Abbu  kyun kya hua:

Ammi :wo kisi ladke ke saath picnic per jaana chahti..aur aapne haan keh diya.. Angry

Abbu: bhai …ladke ke nani nana bhi to saath hain..akele ladke ke saath thodi ja rahi hai

Ammi: bigaado aur bigaado usay.. Angry

Abbu:..bhai…hamari simar samajdaar bachchi hai…usay achche buray ka pata hai…wo chahti to humse jhoot bhi bol sakti thi ke kisi saheli ke saath jaa rahi…per usne humse kuch chupaya nahi….hame bhi usper bharosa karna chahiye…is umr ke bachchon ko maa baap nahi dost banker sambhalna padta hai..

Achcha chalo ek coffee pila do.. Smile

Ammi…main nahi bana rahi koi coffee…  Angry

Abbu…hahaha..achcha  begum sahib…chalo main khud aapke liye coffee banata..aap yaha baithiye aur apna gussa thanda kijiye.. Smile



Aaj phir simar ka din achcha guzra…Rakeb ki har ada per uska pyar badhta hi jaa raha tha..





ajnabi kaun ho tum, jabse tumhe dekha hai

saari duniya meri aankhon mein simat aayi hai



khwaab ka rang haqeeqat mein nazar aaya hai

dil mein dhadkan ki tarah koi utar aaya hai







Picnic:



Saturday saaree raat simar ko neend nahi aati hai..dusre din rakeb ki family ke saath picnic jaana, yeh soch soch ker dil hi dil me laddu photo rahe thay..


dress aur saaraa picnic ka saamaan bhi ready kar liya…aur ek ghanta pehle se hi ready hoker intezaar karne lagi..



Theek 6 baje rakeb ka call aata hai..



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TO BE CONTINUED...
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Zainy Jee Aadaab...!

jee padh to rahe haiN sab log par replys nahi karte khair apni apni masliyat hai...
Achcha episode huaa and haaN achche twist par roka hai ...

Waiting for next ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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